Analysis of at least one sequence from the rough cut- preferably one sequence that you intend to change in light of your feedback from your teacher (Production)

This shot was originally in the first verse which did not correspond with the rest of the first verse that was in a different location to this shot. So, we saved this shot for the second verse, which was more fitting because it went with the playful dimensions of the songs' lyrics.

      

With this shot we were advised that katherine should walk for less time,which will help to give the video added pace like the conventions of music videos. Therefore, we changed Katherine's walking length by her starting from a shorter length. 

 

There needs to be a close up of this shot to fit with the conventions of music videos and have this shot for playing for less time because the audience will get bored quickly. Also, it was suggested that we have a close up of parts of Damon's body to introduce him more clearly to the storyline of the music video.